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Ravenstar::DarkClan::Tom
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Name: Ravenstar

Do you honor?: Yes

Age: 15 moons

Gender: tom

Appearance: Ravenstar is an almost completely jet-black tom, with snow-white paws and muzzle. One of his eyes is a dull grey- like stone- and the other is a deep green, both with black slits, like an almost completely waned moon. His eyes usually have a maniacal glow to them but when he's concentrating, his green eye changes shade almost completely. His pelt is long and matted in places as he long since forgot about what he looks like. His tail is jet black with white patches like snowflakes frozen on his tail. Ravenstar is rippled with muscles, though his long fur disguises this fact. Ravenstar has heaps of battle scars, but only two are visible; one running from the corner of his left eye down his lip, making him look he has a permanent scowl, and another from shoulder to the base of his spine, inflicted after he got exiled from ThunderClan

RP Example: A black shadow, dotted with snow-white, flashed across the intruding cats vision. The intruding cat, of RiverClan, thought it would just be a rogue, and prepared for a fight. Ravenstar suddenly flew from a tree and launched himself at the RiverClan warrior. He tore out its throat without thinking about it. Ravenstar almost thought about taking this to share with his Clan, but knew that is was a cat-eat-cat world, and although he was leader, leaders didn't last long, and Ravenstar knew that if he showed weakness, the other Clan-cats would overthrow him instantly. So he took it back to his camp and ate it himself, in silence.

Clan: DarkClan

Rank: Leader

Breed: Unknown

Personality: Ravenstar isn't exactly a quiet cat, though it may be safer for the general cats in the area. He is often heard barking orders to his DarkClan warriors or discussing battle plans with his deputy. He is a stubborn cat, so stubborn that cats that disagree with him usually end up mortally wounded or dead. Ravenstar doesn't have as much faith in StarClan as most cats, as he lost all faith in it when he was exiled from ThunderClan. He is a naturally mean cat, but has a habit of being nicer than he is to gain cats trust. Ravenstar easily gets caught up in battle, and cats in his own Clan fear his infamous "battle rage" in which he kills anyone in his way, no matter which Clan. He always fights to the death.

History: Ravenstar could have been an excellent ThunderClan warrior, but it was against his nature to be a "goody-goody". As a kit, Ravenstar, then Ravenkit, had always been very hard to handle, fighting with his siblings and the other kits. Not long after Ravenstar had become an apprentice, he was patrolling the border with his brother and sister when he heard a pathetic mew from the bushes. They went to investigate and saw a RiverClan queen, with two kits, mewling pathetically at him. Ravenstar, believing they were intruding, killed them, and liked it. In his battle rage, he killed his brother and sister, as they had tried to hold him back. Soon after arriving back at ThunderClan camp, his secret was revealed and he was exiled. Since then he has been recruiting the most dangerous rogues and loners, to create. . . DarkClan.

Pictures: naa, see siggy (coming soon)

Code Word: Star Forest.

« Last Edit: Jun 22, 2007, 6:40pm by Dorynator »

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--Ravenstar--Crush, kill, destroy.

And lo, he looked into the face of beauty and beauty stayed his hand. And from that day, he was but one dead.

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Re: Ravenstar::DarkClan::Tom
« Reply #1 on Jun 22, 2007, 1:34pm »

Thank you for accepting my recklessness of losing your bio. I found a few mistakes, but everything else is well.

Appearance:
Ravenstar has heaps of battle scars, but only to are visible; one running from the corner of his left eye down his lip, making him look he has a permanent scowl, and another from shoulder to the base of his spine, inflicted after he got exiled from ThunderClan

Ravenstar has heaps of battle scars, but only two are visible; one running from the corner of his left eye down his lip, making him look he has a permanent scowl, and another from shoulder to the base of his spine, inflicted after he got exiled from ThunderClan.

Role-Play:
Ravenstar, suddenly, flew from a tree and launched himself at the RiverClan warrior.

Ravenstar suddenly flew from a tree and launched himself at the RiverClan warrior. (I'm not sure about this. If you want it this way, just let me know.)

History:
Ravenstar coul dhave been an excellent ThunderClan warrior, but it was against his nature to be a "goody-goody".

Ravenstar could have been an excellent ThunderClan warrior, but it was against his nature to be a "goody-goody".

Ravenstar, believing they were intruding, killed them, and liked it.

Ravenstar believed they were intruding. He killed them and liked it. (I'm also not sure about this. If you want it the other way, just let me know.)

Run it through Microsoft Word or Spell Check, and I'll accept you.

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